Unfortunately I didn’t get to listen to the podcast due to
technological difficulties, but I did read Obama’s speech “A More Perfect
Union”. I really enjoyed this read because I saw Obama in a different light. This
speech is a response to controversial statements that his former pastor made,
and is very powerful and well recited. Obama is obviously credible because he
is the president of the United States and has had much experience in politics
former to being president. Obama makes himself likeable when he talks about his
goal to better America. His belief in a more prosperous future for America
“comes from [his] unyielding faith in the decency and generosity of the
American people” (648). You could say
that Obama is likeable because this statement is showing that he has faith in
America and the people that make up America. You can tell that Obama is humble
when he admits that his story “hasn’t made [him] the most conventional
candidate” (649) and when he says “…a candidacy as imperfect as my own” (658).
At least two times in this speech he humbly states that he might not be the
perfect candidate, but is willing to do what it takes to better America. Obama
makes his arguments a lot stronger when he states questions that most would ask
when giving his speech and answers them. For example, “Why associate myself
with Reverend Wright in the first place, they may ask? Why not join another
church?” (651). He then goes on to answer those questions and provide clear
explanations. Obama seems optimistic when he says, “Like the anger within the
black community, these resentments aren’t always expressed in polite company.
But they have helped shape the political landscape for at least a generation”
(657). The reason I think he seems optimistic here is because he is finding the
good out of a bad situation: shaping America into what it is today. In this speech you can obviously tell that Obama is a
faithful religious man with many notions in his speech of God, and the plain
fact that his speech is responding to injustice statements made by his former
pastor. Obama makes himself look very family oriented and kind by many remarks
in his speech. One that stood out to me was when he says that America needs to
“take on full responsibility for our own lives – by demanding more from our
fathers, and spending more time with our children, and reading to them, and
teaching them that while they may face challenges … they must always believe
that they can write their own destiny” (658).
I agree with Haley, the speech is very well articulated and humble at the same time. But there were points where I questioned his charisma. He was very good at capturing the attention of the audience, but it could have been more powerful.
ReplyDeleteI did like what he had to say about issues and when he talks about "hasn't made [him] the most conventional candidate" but he rises up and answers all the questions. It was an interesting speech, and very optimistic.
Like many of my classmates, the link to the podcast would not work for me also. However, i did read Barrack Obamas speech, "A More Perfect Union". Obama has aways been an effective public speaker as we have seen and this speech is up to par. Obama uses quite a bit of emotion in this speech to address racial tensions caused by some contreversial comments made by Obamas pastor. He continues to talk about some hard ships he went through because of racism and racial inequality. Obamas speech seems very optimistic trying to get his audience to feel better about racial issues in America and makes it seem like we are on a path to racial equality. He also talks about some emotions the people have pertaining to racial issues like, how many African Americans are angry because of racial inequality. Overall Obama does a great job delivering his message and giving the American people some optimism towards the advancement of racial equality.
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